Tuesday Tiny Writing Tip #19 – Everything Happens for a Reason

Tuesday Tiny Writing Tip #19 by Dilyana Kyoseva (CatMint5 on wattpad) - Everything happens for a reason

Give your heroes and villains a reason to say or do something, especially if that something is out of character for them.

“I read Chapter 4 of your story and your MC has always been very tolerant on the topic of religion, yet in it he makes fun of a Jewish boy; why?” – if you get a comment like that then there’s a chance you should edit Chapter 4 or add an explanation in Chapter 5. And I don’t mean write an A/N in Ch. 5 that goes “My MC was having a bad day and took it out on the wrong person in Ch. 4; they are still respectful of other people’s religion”; you should include the character having an off day in the chapters. Go back to Chapter 4, rewrite it and show us your MC is having a tough time. Then, in Chapter 5, have him be remorseful or even resentful of what they’ve done, maybe make him look for the Jewish boy so he could apologize.

For more on writing characters, check out Tuesday Tiny Writing Tips #14 – Diversity for the sake of diversity and #15 – Character Development and Beliefs.

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